Mid-March Storm
Wheeze and peal
trail up from the quarry.
I thought that graffiti'd shack
had been abandoned.
On the culvert's far side, a man,
made tiny by distance,
plays the accordion.
On my side, the tips
of the hedge are clotted
with snow like full-blown dandelion.
I blow and wish.
I like the imagery here... " clotted with snow like full-blown dandelion..."
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. ...made tiny with distance...lovely.
ReplyDeleteThis is very nice. Quiet and understated, but powerful nevertheless.
ReplyDeleteThank you for linking up to Trifecta this week. This is gorgeous writing. I love the clotted hedge. You have a beautiful way with words. Hope to see you back again soon.
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
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